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Name: Ranzor
Nickname/Alias: Ran
Race/Species: Nautolan
Place of Birth: Glenn Anselm
Current Age: 28
Gender: Male
Height: 1.84 m
Weight: 86 kgs
Appearance:
Hair: None
Eyes: Black
Skin: Green
Scars: None
Tattoos: None
Piercings: None
Clothing: Traditional Jedi robes.

Force Specialty: Ranzor is quite proficient in using telekinetic abilities.
Lightsaber forms:
Form I/Shii-Cho: Mastered
Form II/Makashi: Mastered
Form III/Soresu: Learned
Form IV/Ataru: Learned - Experienced
Form V/Shien/Djem So: Learned
Form VI/Niman: Learned
Equipment: N/A
Lightsabers: Green blade, able to work underwater.
Occupation: Jedi Knight (aspiring Jedi Blademaster)

Biography: Ranzor was born on Glen Anselm, but as an force sensitive infant, he was taken by Jedi off his family and taken to Coruscant Jedi Temple, where he began his training as a Jedi. In his youth, he showed considerable talent with working in library and with his lightsaber, being the first, who constructed his first lightsaber through meditation in his class. When he was 13, Jedi Master Karr, another Nautolan, chose him as his padawan and encouraged Ranzor to dive into knowledge, as they both found it vital for surviving. Ocassionally, they both ventured behind the borders of the Republic on missions for the Jedi, and on their trip, Ranzor aquired many datacards and datapads, containing information about undiscovered planets in Unknown Regions and brought them to the Temple, where the information was stored in the Archives.
His master Karr vanished under mysterious circumstances, when Ranzor was 17. Padawan without a master was considered a shame by others, so young Nautolan started to keep himself from the crowd, staying with the databanks and information in the Library or training his lightsaber combat in the Training wing. His calm personality seemed to be only mask to others, but inside, Ranzor did not feel any dark feelings towards others. He just wanted others to leave him alone and stop making fun of him. Until these days, nearly eleven years after losing a master, he keeps studying and training and waits patiently for being chosen again by Jedi Knight or Master to continue Karr's previous training.

Personality: Calm, shy, silent.
Strengths: He is proficient in lightsaber combat, training most of his free time. He is also talented musician, for other Nautolans. Other species do not really understand the music of his people.
Weaknesses: He is considerably shy, keeping himself more into meditations and studying, than to be with other people. Also, he is not very trusting, due to fact other Jedi picked on him before, which causes him to refuse to talk with other people. He is not very strong with the Force, relying more on his lightsaber. He thinks it is his weakness. As good lightsaber fighter he is (only with Schii-Cho so far), he tends to forget using Force and to rely on it as other Jedi do.

Ships: None.
Another character sheet for JediOrder :)

Lightsaber hilt: [link]

Preview image belongs to LucasArts and their Clone Wars series.
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:iconlady-kaelyra:
Lady-Kaelyra Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Writer
Master! :worship:
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Rexness613 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist
Nice :) seems like a good well thought out charcter. Good job :D
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Amaryon Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hah, thanks. honestly, it is one of those fast written ones, and I still have a feeling he needs a little nerfing still :D But thanks again :)
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halfnakedninja Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it, good job.
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Amaryon Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :) I hope we might RP soon :D
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halfnakedninja Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Who knows, maybe Ran will end up interacting with one of them at some point.
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FacePalmNinja Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, but everything else seems fine... eh... might want to work on weaknesses a bit. Being untrustworthy is interesting but you need more than just that. Perhaps an explaination on how his untrustworthy can be his weakness?
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Amaryon Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Okay :) Working on it right away, I have few more ideas in my head already.
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FacePalmNinja Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Carry on. :)
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FacePalmNinja Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Typically, for lightsaber combat you'll only know Shii-Cho starting off. It would be my job as a Master (or another with Knight or Master status) to help develop your character in the other 6 forms that follow.

Every Jedi doesn't necessarily focus their training in one prolific form, many Jedi (and Sith alike) tend to adopt a Hybrid version of two or more forms by drawing from specific ideals each form revolves around. It's okay to have "knowledge" about the forms you mentioned, but their use and reliance would be mediocre at best, at least until an appropriate Jedi Master can help develop your character further.
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